Alien technology
on October 24, 2014 at 12:01 amChapter: It's...
Characters: Daisy Conrad, David Walkerton, Head Alien, Jason Chesterfield, Joe Rosenthal, Joyce Brown, Mike Warner
Location: Washington D.C.
Also I thought it’d be important that Walky make a declaration of intent of doing the right thing BEFORE he’s suddenly granted magical powers. That way it’s a little less “hey i’m the hero because the story says so, despite all logic to the contrary” and a little more “i’m the hero because i act like one.” It’s a close call, because I still kind of have to fit the parameters of the original story, but I tried to massage that angle in there regardless. Still sort of inelegant, but you go to war with the It’s Walky! you have, not the It’s Walky! you want.
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