I can count the enemies.

by David Willis on June 1, 2019 at 12:01 am
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2019-06-01

Sometimes when Joyce speechifies to herself, her dialogue slips into Dina territory, I think.  “This trial is not insurmountable” just feels very Dina, I dunno.  Use a few more contractions, Joyce!

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